对于很多备考雅思写作的同学，经常能遭遇到总突破不了高分的困境。单词，模板，万能句式什么的都没少背，为什么还不能提高呢?今天小编给大家带来了雅思写作提分五点要求,希望能够帮助到大家，一起来学习吧。
雅思写作提分五点要求
雅思写作提分要求1：审题最重要，紧抓题目中心论点，观点鲜明，论据充分。
通常来说，考生在进行雅思作文写作中。除了要抓住题目核心之外，就是要对考生写的话题要有鲜明的观点和充分的论据。尤其是对论据的叙说，因为观点很好被提出来，重点就是你选用的题材是不是很恰当。同时有良好的方法将论据一一延展。文章应该有一条无形的线贯穿始终，任何偏离文章总观点的内容都应该被删除，哪怕那些段落和句子非常亮眼。
通常考生在学习雅思写作技巧的时候， 总会被强调文章逻辑结构。很多考生其实很难理解到底是什么意思， 其实通俗来说就是内容扣题，例子客观，上下文互相呼应。考生在对模板的使用也需要注意， 例如需要从各个话题母题(经典高频考题)及预测题目的思路整理出发，通过学习成熟写作内容来打开思路，练习审题，以保证作文内容的扣题。
传统的备考方法注重题目表面陈述方式的差异性，比如：议论文Argumentation(议论文)类题型题目的陈述方式常见的有：
1.一个观点的讨论。提问方式：To what extent do you agree or disagree? / What is your opinion on this statement (=issue)?
2.两个观点的讨论。提问方式：Discuss both opinions and give your own idea.
3.讨论现象或事物的利弊。提问方式：Do the advantages of... outweigh the disadvantages? / Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of...
上述三点看似不同，但并没有实质性的差别，它们都体现出了唯一的写作要求：即辩证地分析题目中提出的讨论内容并表明态度。其实，如果按照国外预科语言课程写作题型分类来判断，Argumentation(议论文)类题型分为三种Influence，Prediction，Solution;这种题型的分类更注重写作任务本身，而非题目的表面陈述方式。
很多考生都喜欢使用写作的万能模板，其实这样对于想突破高分的人而言是不利的。最好尽量避免使用这些模板，因为我们需要强调的是文章的中心观点决定文章逻辑结构，而不是题目表面的陈述方式，更不能忽略不同题目写作内容的差异来刻意统一出一个“最容易得分”的结构。换句话说，写作评分标准里第一项文章内容的确定在先，第二项文章逻辑结构的判断其次，是根据内容需求选择逻辑结构。
考生在使用词汇和短语的时候，一定要切记不要重复用词，最好能用多种表达方式去表现句子含义，这样才能体现考生用词丰富。此外，很多考生觉得记同义词就可以解决上述问题，但依旧得不了高分，其实是很多相近意思的词汇存在很多细节和适用语境的差别。例如要表达“小心的”，careful为最一般意义的小心，cautious则是“警觉”，meticulous有“一丝不苟”的含义，scrupulous是在“正直”前提下表现出的细心谨慎。这几个单词不能随意换用，而要根据描述的对象与程度来选用。另外最基本重要的就是用词准确性。一切使用不当的词汇都会断送分数。雅思考官对微小错误的惩罚力度极大，不论是基础语法还是词汇，连续的失误可能导致分数0.5-1分的惩罚，这与口语类似。由于较生僻的词汇一般有很具体的应用情景，稍有不当都可能给考官生搬硬套的印象，甚至直接影响最终成绩。
很多考生在进行雅思写作的时候，总偏爱用几种句型替换写，而不在乎是不是合适的。因此选择合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为精确和简练。以下是在考虑选择何种语法结构时可以参考的原则。
1.在雅思写作中，一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如：
The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.
从意思上来分析，上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“grandfather's not being able to study”.
在表达这个概念时，原句用的主语是situation,谓语动词是was,不能强调需要表达的重点概念，可以改为下面这句话：
My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.
例如：There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.
可以改为：
My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.
更简洁的句式为：
My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.
例如：Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.
The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university.
4.在雅思写作中，仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候，才使用被动语态。
例如：In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather's family.
本句不够简洁的原因是本句的重心应该是“忙碌的家庭-my grandfather's family”.
而使用了被动语态后，仿佛重心变成了cows和hay,下面的表达方式是主动语态，相对来说更简洁一些：
In the fall, my grandfather's family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.
Trade and travel would be a lot easier with a single, global currency that we all use.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Would a single currency cause any problems?
Model Answer:
It is clear to me that the idea of a single global currency is an excellent ideal to work towards. There can be no doubt that trade and travel would be vastly easier. On the other hand I believe that it would cause problems today.
The benefits of a single currency can be seen with the use in Europe of the Euro. Whenever you are travelling between countries using the Euro, the problems of currency changing and exchange rates are history. Similarly business between countries using the Euros is so much easier; no more worrying about exchange rate risk and pricing. Everyone‛s money is the same. The same thing is true with the US dollar. Most countries do not use the US dollar but it is accepted in many places. There are many countries that you can travel to and just take US dollars to use.
At present though a global currency would be impossible. Firstly most countries would not accept the idea. Secondly all countries are in different economic states. Some are economically very strong and some are in a state of collapse with inflation ruining the economy. Such countries could not be brought into a world currency as it would cause massive financial instability worldwide. So it is clear that a global currency would indeed cause some serious problems.
So, in conclusion I see a global currency as a future ideal but it will not happen in my lifetime. It would make trade and travel much easier but the problems it would cause nowadays would be insurmountable.
The 21st century has begun.
What changes do you think this new century will bring?
Model Answer:
Man, through the ages, has undergone many changes from the time when he depicted a herd of mammoths on the walls of his cave to these days when he can create beautiful pictures and even make coffee by use of computer technologies without leaving his favorite chair. The 20th century made huge steps in developing computer technologies and reached many goals that made our life much easier. What should we expect in the 21st century?
First of all, I think that the pace of our life will speed up: we will move faster from one place to another, from one continent to another using high speed jet airplanes. Second of all, I believe that we will be able to do many things that take much time now without leaving our house. Computers will be everywhere including out clothes. Many people will have chips and mini computers inserted in their heads to hold huge amount of information and have a quick access to it.
But what will be the most amazing thing in the 21st century is the flights to the outer space and Mars that will be available to all people. Scientists say that Mars has many things similar to the Earth's. Moreover, they say that with the help of modern technology people can artificially create conditions that will allow people to live there on the constant basis.
To sum up, I am sure that many amazing changes will be brought by the 21st century. Furthermore, I think that with the help of the contemporary technologies people can do many things that were even difficult to imagine a century ago. So, nowadays it is rather difficult and even impossible to imagine all changes that will happen in the next decades.
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