很多考生都遭遇入雅思写作低分瓶颈，解决的方法也只知道不断的背模板和句型。今天小编给大家带来了雅思写作冲刺高分注意事项,希望能够帮助到大家，一起来学习吧。
很多考生都会觉得用一个生僻高级的词汇，会让考官眼前一亮和证明自己词汇量丰富。其实这样的想法是错误的，考生在没有把握下，避免生硬的进行同义互换，因为会导致句子结构僵硬，让考官觉得突兀和不恰当。因此，如果使用更多的短语去代替词汇，能够让考官不仅看到语法运用熟悉得体，而且还能表现你词汇词组的综合运用能力，有些时候还能让考生的简单句变得更加精巧。顺道说一句，多用短语还能增加字数，对于有些考生遇到无话可说的情况是有很大帮助的。我们看下面例子：
I cannot bear it.
用短语替换：I cannot put up with it. I want it.
用短语替换：I am looking forward to it.
往往考生很喜欢陈述观点，会花很大篇幅去诉说自己的观点，而不是例子证明。这样一来很容易导致空话太多，关于如何证明你观点的内容变很少。这就很容易导致考生喜欢积累虚词，而忽视对实词的运用。小站君指的虚词就是指范围很大的，类似于good，important这种。考生如果想提高写作中实词的使用率，应该注重对虚词进行具体化，例如good可以改为generous, humorous等。让考官能够切身感受。我们看看下面例子：
如果考生想描述离开房间，通常会说：walk out of the room
但要是描述特点对象走出房间的话，如果再用walk out of the room就会失色不少。如果特定对象是小偷的话，可以说：slip out of the room.如果特点对象是小姐的话，可以说：sail out of the room.如果说是老人的话，可以说：stagger out of the room.这样一来，我们在写作描述的时候会更加具体生动。
很多考生都很习惯开头放一个很震撼的观点句，目的是为了让考官觉得你想法独特，有额外见解等。当在看完整句之后，发现并没有很多解释这个观点的分句。如何去避免虎头蛇尾的问题，小站君推荐使用多种从句之外，也要知道使用从句的变形。看看下面的例子：
例如，当考生写到：This is what I can do. Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以变形成：When to go,Whyhe goes away…
很多考生都会认为像排比句这种中式写法，出现在雅思写作中会不合适。其实这个观念是错误，所谓的排比句，放在雅思里面可以引申为一个个的不定式，一个个的词，一个个的短语等。这样的递进式的写法，除了能够强调观点之外，还能使得文章更精彩。我们可以看下面例子：
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.
很多考生对于写作的语法要求，可以说是了然于胸。然而缺乏对冷门语句的学习和归纳，这样会导致文章内容单一。很多考生对于独立主格的句子会很陌生，觉得不会用在写作当中，其实在很多雅思考官范文中，会有很多这种句子的出现。例如，独立主格是一种分词的特殊形式，分词要求是主语一致，但独立主格是要求不一致的。因此，要学会如何写独立主格，让文章更加丰富起来。考生可以参考下面例子：
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.
Write about the following topic:
In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old peoples where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.
Who should be responsible for our old people?
Model Answer:
Many old people in Britain, after a lifetime of hard work and the toil of bringing up children, are put into homes for the elderly by their families. There, they are looked after by professional nurses, and this is sometimes at the expense of the government. However, this situation has raised controversy about whether we extend to our elders the care and respect they deserve.
The critics of this system say that it is the duty of the family to look after its senior members in the years when they are no longer able to work. They point out that in retirement homes old people tend to feel useless and unwanted by their family members, who seldom come to see them. In addition, there is evidence that younger people benefit from the experience and wisdom of older people who live with them on a daily basis.
On the other had, those who support the system say that retired parents can be a burden to young families. Not only is it expensive to support old people who have little or no income, but the fact that old people are often ill and need a great deal of looking after can be too much for their busy children.
In my opinion, neither side is completely right. Old people in good health and with enough finances to support themselves can be a great help to their children. For instance, they can look after their grandchildren while children are out at work. On the other had, sick and penniless old people are better off being looked after in retirement homes at government expense.
Write about the following topic:
Children who are brought up in the family that do not have a lot of money are better prepared to deal with problems when they become adults than children who are brought up by wealthy parent.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Model Answer:
Over the past few decades, along with growing interest in child education, people's attention to the family environment where a child is brought up has also significantly increased. Some people have begun to feel that a child who has grown up in a poor family tend to be better prepared to deal with problems. In my opinion, however, family environment alone does not much influence a child's ability to solve problems.
A child who was born into a poor family would have had more situations where they had to solve a problem or make a decision on their own. This is because in most unfortunate families, both parents are usually working and children are put into situations where they have to take care of themselves. By contrast, due to their wealth, rich children can experience and learn things that unfortunate children cannot. For example, they usually go to the best schools and receive a higher education there, which prepares them better for solving problems in their life.
However, few would disagree with the fact that each individual is different. That is, problem solving skills come more from life experience. That is, the more a person experiences in life, the more they can use these experiences to adjust, to adapt and to solve problems they encounter. Personality also can be a factor in dealing with problems. A person who is optimistic, outgoing, confident and open-minded can look at and solve problems more effectively.
As discussed above, nature and nurture have an equal influence on a child's ability to face challenges. Parents should spare no effort to figure out how they can help their children to be independent. I hope that in the future the next generation will grow up as mature citizens.
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